Captain Marin

For one to be a great leader, he/she needs to be a great follower as well. The reason why there aren't as many "great" leaders within the borderlines of Planet Bob is because one needs to achieve much to earn that position they desire. And to be honest, Bob has never had any "great" leaders at all. Wanna-bes, yes, but not any great that I have heard of. If there is one person that comes along and achieves to have this Cyberverse kneeling before them, then my opinion at that will change.

Really? This is merely a post, I do not know what is so hilarious about a text . Yeah, Im about to turn sixteen, so maybe what I am speaking of is naivety, but the only worrying I see in andult is the bills and his/her own job (if the adult does not have a family). As I have said, if you're an adult whose had no children, I do not see the real struggle of the adult.

Really? If Yeezy was such a hard rapper then he wouldn't be wearing skirts and picking fights with vocalists. As for production, I agree that Kanye is a better producer than Shady, but other than that, Yeezy cannot set the same bar Eminem has set for the rap game. You're lying to yourself if you think Kanye had the better verse. Hell, even Drake and Lil Wayne went harder than Kanye. Eminem is not praised because he is white, he is highly praised because he is not afraid to speak what he truly believes. Eminem believed it was harsh of Yeezy to ditch them on the Grammy Performance on 2009, he later burned him on No Love. Eminem believed Will Smith is a coward for thinking you can succeed in the rap game without cursing, he burned him in Real Slim Shady. Eminem despises his wife and felt like murdering her, he went on and did not hesitate to express his emotions. Eminem puts his heart and soul in his music. Anyone who does not like it, or believes some mediocre work is better than his, does not simply know the hurdles he had to jump through to get to the position he currently is at. *facepalm* Dude, how dare you compare Chief Keef to Eminem! Yes, Eminem made some pop tracks, but he only made a couple of them (both of them in which he was featured in). Slim Shady LP and Infinite was his hunger for fame, MMLP was his rage against society, Eminem Show was his feud with Kim and fame, Encore was random, Relapse was about murder and rape, and Recovery was about the psychological warfare with himself. I agree, Eminem is running out of things to rap about, but at least he tries to choose a topic to rap to instead of collecting random words and making them rhyme that does not make sense like Kanye is doing so. 1) People love Eminem because he raps about the same objectives everyone is going through. Do you hate your mom because she uses violence and/or drugs against you? Listen to Cleanin Out My Closet. Did your girl just screw you over? Listen to Kim or Space Bound. Do you want to feel at ease when expressing your concerns with your girlfriend? Listen to Love the Way You Lie. Do you feel like you just hit rock bottom? Listen to Rock Bottom. Are you vastly hated for being you? Listen to No Apologies and Sing for the Moment. You want to be pumped up and motivated? Listen to Till I Collapse? Want to redeem yourself emotionally and personally? Listen to Cinderella Man and Not Afraid. The fact is that music controls the feelings of one. Music composes and extracts the same emotions the consumer is feeling. Eminem is smart enough to acknowledge that and embrace it with his music. What does Kanye West do? Raps about power and swag. And if you think Recovery sucked and he fell the $%&@ off? Please listen to this. http://youtu.be/dVN1R1Copoc

But then again, Im arguing with a guy who believes a boring, Chipmunked-voice 2Pac that wears a skirt spits better than a rapper who has proven himself legendary time after time.

I never heard Yeezy pull off stanza as smart as this one nor flow as H.A.M as Em did on this one: It is really ironic how you dare call Limp Bizkit and Vanilla Ice bad when they had legions of fans before they dared to beef with Slim (not that Im a fan of them, they're horrible). Limp Bizkit, Vanilla Ice, and Eminem both have really similar fans and when Shady exposed just how much of punks they are and put them on fire, any fan of Limp and Ice were ashamed to be one. Just check out "Girls" and "Nail in the Coffin", I would've put the mic down and not make another diss record if it were directed to me. And it is really coincidental how they became irrelevant in rap after the beef against Em. The Source is not as relevant as they were in the past, period. You say how my argument falls flat when you are saying a rapper, who never had experience in the rap battle arena, would burn an emcee who has been highly praised in the rap game for 10 plus years. And you still haven't answered my question, who had the better verse in Forever, Eminem or Yeezy?

Kanye West is not as lyrical and produces mediocrity. He does not put any effort to compose anything original. The only originality from that whack MC is his fashion trend. The dude talks about being real and hard as he raps in a skirt. Anything Yeezy is featured on, he automatically kills the track (Forever, Watch the Throne album, coff coff). If Yeezy is so H.A.M when compared to Eminem, I would like to hear your opinion about who had the better verse in Forever (only song Kanye and Em were both in). As for Kid Cudi, he does not have a good singing voice. If anything I've heard from him, it is that his music is annoying, period. If you can redirect me to a song that you believe is the best from Cudi, maybe my opinion will change if it is for my taste. Wale is meh, if you listen to "I'm A Boss" or "Traumatized", his lyricism and flow is amazing. As for Eminem "falling off" after Eminem Show, Imma throw five 2009 and above Eminem songs/verses and let you be the judge: Almost Famous Drop the World Despicable Freestyle No Love All She Wrote (Solo Version) I also see you only saying Cinderella Man was a bad song, from all the songs I've listed in my previous post. As for Eminem rebutting from the beef, he said in Not Afraid no more "beef flingers" for the sake of his daughters since he already had experience with that, and his last beef with Murder Inc got his best friend killed, massive paparrazi chasing over him, and ruining the childhood of his daughters. He, then, apologized for the disses in No Love and subliminal burns in Not Afraid and Seduction so he would prevent anything like that from happening. All rappers mentioned in Talkin to Myself were subliminally/directly dissed in Recovery (along with Drake in Eminem's Despicable Freestyle). He took down and destroyed the careers of all of the Murder Inc roster, DJ Lethal, Vanilla Ice, Everlast, Limp Bizkit and obliterated the business of the Source, all on his own. If Shady could do something like that, why the hell would he be scared of a skirt-wearing, chipmunk-voiced punk who fails at trying to go Makaveli on us.

That is why he produced Recovery and Hell: the Sequel. Because I see no talent in both "artists". Sure, Yeezy might be a decent producer, but his skills as an emcee is really treacherous to hear and see. His lyrics are plain, delivery is plain, EVERYTHING IS PLAIN! Only verse I respected from him was in Run This Town. And his voice sounds like a freaking Alvin and the Chipmunk! I left out MMG since Meek Millz is signed there. Really? I would like to hear your opinion in who had the better verse in "Forever" since that is the only song both Eminem and Kanye were on. And just a heads up, I believe you are pissy against Shady because he directly and subliminally dissed Yeezy in Forever and No Love as Em's right-hand man (Royce 5'9) burned Mr. West in Above the Law. I can just throw out ten Eminem lines and prove you that they are better than anything Yeezy spit. Skits and Freestyles does not make me laugh often, but this line made me cough out a smirk. "Hockey, !@#$ thought I had the place flowing I hate to put you on ice but You already had 3 periods in 60 minutes, great going" In an honest perspective, I always become fed up when people say Recovery's didn't have the tracks to set as equal or more than his old stuff. Not Afraid, 25 to Life, No Love, Seduction, Almost Famous, Wont Back Down, Going Through Changes, Space Bound, Cinderella Man, Love the Way You Lie, and Session One were all great songs. From his recent freestyle, I assume that we will see the same content in Hell:the Sequel

What? Being an adult is more of a pain in the ass than being a kid or a teenager? That is absolute !@#$%^&*! All you have worry about, as an adult, is labor and the bills, that is it! Teenagers have to worry about schoolwork, blending in society, the absolute headaches your own peers and your own parents causes, being commanded upon, seen and viewed as unimportant. If you are an adult raising children, then that is a different story, but if not, then I see no struggle to be an adult.

Kanye and Kid Cudi are crap compared to any rapper besides any signee of YMCMB and Taylor Gang.

The Republic of the Exodus congratulates your country in accomplishing such a beneficial merit. We are proud to see an empire rise.

I agree, but this is a poem, I was not aiming for it to be a rap, but the ones coming next are going to be.

I'm sorry What? I thought that poetry doesn't have to rhyme all the time, but I'll try harder in creating a constructive rhyme scheme. Thanks for the input.

Then I would like to hear (or in this case, read) what excellency is ,authored by you, if it is such mediocrity. Give me an example what a great poem is, from your own pen and paper, if you believe you can do better, so I can step my game up. Or... You can provide constructive criticism since I welcome it with open arms so I can improve as a writer.

That is because maybe I do not have the proper sound equipment to astound the audience and am still underage to participate in America's labor force since I do not want my parents wasting money on such hobby that I may or may not lose interest? And if you do not know, this is a blog, not a thread in the forums. If what you say is true, then I believe the Water Cooler (aka, the Spam/Game-OOC Forums) and our usage of IRC is uncalled for. Diversity brings interest in the community, Darkstorm, it does not bring pointlessness as your accusing of this blog (and many others) being.

Redeem me For I am Hector Strayed by anxiety/ I vociferate for the weak Mercy, I will not plead Enchained by society/ Come forth death Since I seek renaissance I am too late for revival/ My ancestors before me Deemed a loser against the economic battle Yet deemed champion for cultural survival/ I stand mightily against a legion that of a size of a tidal/ Others rage I should stay and pray But vengeance to me, is vital/ But of course, I do fear But my tears shall not control my actions Nor dismiss my crusade against this evil/ I have seen my brothers fall As the treacherous stand tall I will avenge for my people/ I will plead a savior I will plead a hero/ Against me, a million Those I lead, zero/ Lurking beneath the shadows I am dragged by a demon Raging for me to fall before my own knees/ But behind the crimson eyes of this beast, I see that he does not demand, he instead pleads So he can be seen as the beast by all But instead, I will sow a seed/ A seed that represents the hate Page by page/ Rage after rage/ And conceive liberty to those who refused me to lead/ Even though I, alone, battled society As I crawled beneath the trenches/ I shall not deem my position to theirs Nor baffle and wave needles, chainsaws, swords, and wrenches/ To be forgiven, you must forgive. Abandon vengeance/ May the skies sing May the bells of liberty ring For this is Redemption/

Really? Young Jedi was a horrible track lyrically. The instrumental and flow of Logic went H.A.M, but Dizzy Wright ruined this track. I heard his lyrics various, various, various, and various of times, went to rap genius, I saw nothing genuine nor creative in Dizzy's verse. Logic had an awesome flow, but his lyricism flopped all over the place. Not to mention that Logic sees himself as Goku and Darth Vader's heavy breathing is used in this track, noting that this track is ironically titled "Young Jedi". That track was nothing but a failed attempt of a song to catch the eye of the mainstream.

It is disappointing how Hollywood treats rap as a joke

Glory to the Concordat!

The citizens and residents of the Exodus Republic shall celebrate this day and create a worldwide holiday to ignite in joy known as Judicium Day. The red menace shall receive no mercy for the sins they have committed in Bob and justice shall finally prosper!

Yes, but the countless amounts of hypocrisy this Hopsin guy has committed proves that he isn't as real as he says he is: 1. "A real !@#$%* dont brag about being real as long as he knows it" I strongly agree with this belief Hopsin has said in Ill Mind 5, but if you dont follow what you say, dont say it at all. "I'm Hopsin, I spit !@#$ so unfair and real." "I been told you !@#$%*, Im real" 2. Ill Mind 5 I do endorse the overall subject Hopsin emphasizes in this song, with the topic being that sex and drugs are immature and overused topics to discuss in the rap game, but he is also emphasizing another topic. He is claiming that sex and drugs are immature topics to rap about, but not rape, murder, and violence? So in Ill Mind 5, he subliminally says that he'd rather see a bunch of guys who have been bullied upon rape victims and harass innocents than a bunch of swaggots (swag + !@#$%^) getting high and drinking booze from what he's been putting out lately. Is that about right? Not to mention he got arrested 3 months after Ill Mind 5. 3. Doo Doo Pants Joke or not joke, he isn't supposed to be releasing this type of music after Ill Mind 5. How can one make one song, and mention in various tracks and interviews, that sex and drugs are stupid topics to rap about and he who raps about it is whack and poisoning the souls of many, but then he comes up with this !@#$%^&* and goes back on his word? And even though if it was a joke, he dissed many many many rappers because of producing this type of music. As he said that rapping about sex, drugs, and money injects venom to a kid's/teenagers mind, why would he be doing that same exact thing he criticizes many rappers for doing? 4. Signing Dizzy Wright Dizzy promotes the usage of marijuana and raps about that, along with sexual intercourse, in his songs. If Hopsin was so underground and was against mainstream, why would he sign a rapper that endorses the same products Hopsin despises. 5. Funk Volume Hopsin has claimed that he isn't in the rap game for the fame and fortune, he's in it because he thinks he's the savior and believes he's been granted a power that can help the world. But as he is saying that, he also says that he despises what Funk Volume has become, wants out of the rap game, but he cant since there is too much money involved. Okay, so if he isnt in the game for the dough, wouldn't he be giving out his tracks for free and simply walk away from the moolah? Hopsin, you say your n sell-out, claim your not in it for the money, yet you hate what FUnk Volume has become and deny to walk away since your eyes and greed is stuck at the view of the stack of stache in your mom's basement?! And to sum it all up, here is one song from the Jokerr that pretty much sums up this entry in under 5-6 minutes. Enjoy!

The Cobalt Concordat is insulted upon by these false convictions! We do not disguise ourselves, we embrace. As Communism has failed consecutively as demonstrated by the course of history, Bob is to vociferate no more to this tyranny your people are poisoning towards our dear planet. Bob has fallen victim to corruption and war, time and time again, and it is because of the Communist philosophies our people blindly follow. The Carmine Coalition dares to accuse us of something we are not. The Carmine Coalition is indoctrinating every single citizen residing the Cyber universe from the truth. The Carmine Coalition is painting themselves as heroes in the public eye, yet deceiving every single one of us behind the very backs we have trusted in this party. People of Bob, trust us. Carmine Coalition, fear us. Embrace us! For shall we not fall victim to the same cycle we've trusted for millennium and fight for the weak and delicate that fear the red scum! For now and forever, we shall yield war against the red menace! We shall wave the banner of the Cobalt Concordat with pride, honor and loyalty. We are not pawns of evil as the Carmine are, we are heroes! We are saviors! Saviors who shall pierce the blade of justice towards the gut of the red menace and knife the adversary with the mighty sword of the people! No more shall we say to you and no more shall we bow with fear and hostility against your party! Ready yourselves for war, men, since hell is about to be unleashed!

This corrupt organization and Communist-supporting party shall be shredded upon and seized by the saviors of Planet Bob. The purpose of the Cobalt Concordat is to eliminate any trace of communism that resides our universe and as the first step of our crusade against the tyrants, we shall dispose of this Carmine Coalition. The Carmine Coalition is a unification of red menaces who dare to threaten any peace and justice our dear Bob has. As long as the Carmine Coalition supports communism and corruption, we shall yield war against these treacherous beasts. Let the bells of liberty ring! Let the skies sing! For today, is one step for the Cyber!

You can make one that talks about that topic..

http://youtu.be/j5-yKhDd64s http://youtu.be/x-8GUXaRig8 Hard to pick between these two.

May the Cobalt Concordat live long enough to watch the Communist menace rot within the ruins of hell, in which the people of Bob shall finally break free from totalitarianism and indoctrination this beast has haunted our dear Bob era after era. We are taking a stand! Communists, beware us! Communists, fear us! For shall we have no mercy against you all!