theone22 Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 On the home page of Cyber Nations it reads: Welcome to Cyber Nations, a free persistent browser-based nation simulation game. I think there has to be a few commas so it would be something like this: Welcome to Cyber Nations, a free, persistent, browser-based nation simulation game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BringMeTheHorizon Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 It doesnt sound right with the commas in there. It sounds better without the commas, and i dont think the commas are needed to break up the sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genau Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Hm, I don't think that the word 'persistant' is really necissary there.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theone22 Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 It doesnt sound right with the commas in there. It sounds better without the commas, and i dont think the commas are needed to break up the sentence. Yes, but without the comma free is modifying persistent and not nation simulation game. So without the commas it would read that persistent is free and not the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
admin Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 The wording looks good to me as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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