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This is the third day of war in the country of France Libre.

Forces at the border are insignificant aginst the enemy forces.

Like at the first day, troops are little numerous and less equipped than the forces who attack us.

And it's not the yesterday victory who prove anything.

they are two hour now the counter attack has been Crush.No one was launch after.

Enemy have tanks, more men, more experience, and, more money.

Our Leader said he have received a propostion of enemy governement.

Pay every month a tax of 20,000 $ and in exchange having portection and reparation.

The answer is clear: " we call that racket, extorsion.

And we refuse that.

An alliance is founded on respect and freedom, not on fear.

And we have no fear.

We NEVER join your ... kingdom.

Liberty merits to die for Her."

Leader have reason, we are ready to pay the price,

and the payement is in blood.

Our.

We have fear. But we hold the line.

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OOC:

well after that only two question for my possible reader

what do you thing of the quality ?

(i am not english and i thing you see that ^_^ , and it's my first RP in english ...)

the second, this situation takes place at the moment of we speek.

is it Authorized?

thanks

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OOC: Well...

Translation:

This is the third day of war in the country of France Libre and our forces at the border have proven ineffective aginst overwhelming enemy forces.

On the first day of fighting, our troops were few in number and poorly equipped compared to the invaders. Yesterday's victory proves nothing.

In the past 2 hours, our counter attack was launched and subsequently repelled. Due to our failure we will be launching no further attacks.

The invaders have tanks, more men, more experience and more money.

Our leader has stated that the enemy have offered surrender terms. They demand a tribute of $20,000 per month and our agreeing to protectorate status.

Our answer is clear, "We see racketeering and extortion for what it is and refuse! A nation is founded on respect and freedom, not on fear and we have no fear. Therefore we declare that we shall never submit to invaders! Liberty shall never die."

Our leader has reasons for this refusal and we are ready to pay the price,

even if the payment is in blood.

We know fear but we shall hold the line to the bitter end of victory!

IC: The New Inca Government commends the bravery of your people.

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OOC:

thanks for this ... traduction

(you can say it's a disaster too :lol: )

just a correction:

"A nation is founded on respect and freedom, not on fear and we have no fear."

"An alliance is founded on respect and freedom, not on fear and we have no fear."

it's the only no sense i have found

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OOC:

i have edit my post, thanks for this information

2 you have made your possible ^_^ and i recognize it's no an easy thing to ... well understand ? (at this point ?)

what i said

thanks for your proposition

i think you will have a PM tomorrow ^^

OOC: Glad to be of help. Also, have you decided on an alliance yet? Going it alone is how you get attacked... Well you know that already. :P

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