Homura Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 [quote name='cookavich' date='07 July 2010 - 08:35 PM' timestamp='1278531313' post='2362631'] The fact that you use Japanese in your charter makes me angry. [/quote] I don't like the Japanese in the charter either, actually, when there's perfectly good English describing the same thing already. (OOC: also those titles are only loosely related to the source material ) Gratuitous foreign language is gratuitous. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael von Prussia Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 [quote name='Tromp' date='07 July 2010 - 06:18 PM' timestamp='1278544721' post='2362863'] Christ, now that is a wall of text. And here I thought a charter should fit on an A4 format piece of paper. [/quote] Short charters are for the weak In this day and age, one really does need a lot of text to flush out the details of alliance works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arrnea Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 (edited) [quote name='cookavich' date='08 July 2010 - 03:35 AM' timestamp='1278531313' post='2362631']The fact that you use Japanese in your charter makes me angry.[/quote] Don't worry Cookie, the Japanese is all translated (or rather, it is the Japanese text that exists as a translation). [quote name='Sal Paradise' date='08 July 2010 - 04:56 AM' timestamp='1278536173' post='2362698']I don't see Sumeragi's position in your charter.[/quote] Why would you? This person you speak of is not a member of the SOS Brigade, let alone part of its government. [quote name='Tromp' date='08 July 2010 - 07:18 AM' timestamp='1278544721' post='2362863']Christ, now that is a wall of text. And here I thought a charter should fit on an A4 format piece of paper. [/quote] You mean like the [url=http://cybernations.wikia.com/wiki/FOK_Charter]FOK Charter[/url], right? [quote name='Katsumi' date='08 July 2010 - 07:55 AM' timestamp='1278546920' post='2362902']I don't like the Japanese in the charter either, actually, when there's perfectly good English describing the same thing already. (OOC: also those titles are only loosely related to the source material ) Gratuitous foreign language is gratuitous.[/quote] (OOC: Actually, most of the Japanese words we've used are used by Haruhi herself at some point in the anime or novels to describe the various characters, or occur in some other fashion (such as the [i]Danchou[/i] and [i]Choukantoku[/i] on Haruhi's armbands at various points.)) Edited July 8, 2010 by Arrnea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal Paradise Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 [quote name='Arrnea' date='08 July 2010 - 12:36 AM' timestamp='1278574592' post='2363268'] Why would you? This person you speak of is not a member of the SOS Brigade, let alone part of its government.[/quote] Well, I never imagined she'd be a part of senior government. Maybe low level functionary? Something menial like setting up trade circles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael von Prussia Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 (edited) [quote name='Sal Paradise' date='08 July 2010 - 02:42 AM' timestamp='1278574940' post='2363269'] Well, I never imagined she'd be a part of senior government. Maybe low level functionary? Something menial like setting up trade circles. [/quote] I see you are determined to give government positions to people who are not in the alliance. Actually, now that you mention it, why aren't [i]you[/i] in the new SOS団 Government? Now that's a move I could support. Director of Excitement Proliferation? Edited July 8, 2010 by Michael von Prussia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tromp Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 [quote name='Arrnea' date='08 July 2010 - 09:36 AM' timestamp='1278574592' post='2363268'] You mean like the [url=http://cybernations.wikia.com/wiki/FOK_Charter]FOK Charter[/url], right? [/quote] Outdated, sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arrnea Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 (edited) [quote name='Tromp' date='08 July 2010 - 06:17 PM' timestamp='1278584225' post='2363317'] Outdated, sorry. [/quote] Looks like [url=http://cybernations.wikia.com/wiki/FOK!-Alliance#Charter]this[/url] is outdated too then. Might want to fix that up. [img]http://se.sosdancn.org/public/style_emoticons/default/1245947316230.png.emo.png[/img] Edited July 8, 2010 by Arrnea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tromp Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 (edited) [quote name='Arrnea' date='08 July 2010 - 12:30 PM' timestamp='1278585001' post='2363319'] Looks like [url=http://cybernations.wikia.com/wiki/FOK!-Alliance#Charter]this[/url] is outdated too then. Might want to fix that up. [img]http://se.sosdancn.org/public/style_emoticons/default/1245947316230.png.emo.png[/img] [/quote] Read the [url=http://cybernations.wikia.com/wiki/FOK_Charter#Article_11_-_Disclaimer_to_the_English_translation]disclaimer[/url]. And OT: Congrats, since I hadn't done that yet. Edited July 8, 2010 by Tromp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Congrats and good luck with the new charter, it looks good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arrnea Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 [quote name='Tromp' date='08 July 2010 - 06:39 PM' timestamp='1278585534' post='2363321']Read the [url=http://cybernations.wikia.com/wiki/FOK_Charter#Article_11_-_Disclaimer_to_the_English_translation]disclaimer[/url]. And OT: Congrats, since I hadn't done that yet.[/quote] Actually, I was referring to the Dutch section, which although I cannot read it, I can see that it is rather long. The disclaimer wouldn't affect that, since it refers only to the English translation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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