Chancellor Bismarck Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 (edited) The Great Universal Epic Discussion, for my story in Fantasy RP. http://forums.cybernations.net/index.php?showtopic=51245 Edited March 12, 2009 by Pacifism Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakwars Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Good Work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Subtleknifewielder Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Hmm...interesting. It's a first draft, I can tell, but it's a good start. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Markus Wilding Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Very good, a lot better than mine by miles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chancellor Bismarck Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Posted the new segment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Subtleknifewielder Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Looking good...VERY good so far. Just one note in case you did't know. If I'm wrong, forgive me for this assumption. In naval parlance, the front of a ship is colled the bow, and the rear the stern. The left is Port, and the right is Starboard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stefano Palmieri Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Looking good...VERY good so far. Just one note in case you did't know. If I'm wrong, forgive me for this assumption.In naval parlance, the front of a ship is colled the bow, and the rear the stern. The left is Port, and the right is Starboard. This be true Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingEsus Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Before i started reading i though it would be awful, but actually its really good. Your a good writer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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