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Scourge

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  1. I hope Article I kicked in early. Good luck to both of you.
  2. Can't believe I missed this - this is one fine ass treaty, and I totally support it. Good luck to both of you.
  3. Tywin, you have a lot of long sentences. Nothing wrong with that, but generally it can help to break things apart to highlight key points. Take this last paragraph for example: With a few sentence structure tweaks: So yeah, there's one tip for you. You might also want to look into not using so many descriptor words. It's a little too flowery at times. When I write, my first draft is usually terrible. I find that it gets better and better as I go through the draft and make small changes one or two at a time, rereading the paragraphs as I make changes. Once I have changed a dozen or so bits, I go back through and reread the whole thing, and try and evaluate if there is any area that I want to improve. Sometimes, it helps to let things set for an hour or two and revisit them. So there's two tips. Practice makes perfect, keep it up!
  4. Sounds like a fun time. Good luck, have fun, and don't forget your towel!
  5. o/ Now when I tell the Emperor that I'm at the bar it'll be a legitimate excuse! Looking forward to working with Last Call in this successful new venture.
  6. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Oh, you're serious? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha We'll be available to discuss the terms of your surrender in #nsa on Coldfront IRC. Until then, enjoy.
  7. Shoutout to BMTH for once again reminding me why I like the damn commies.
  8. Congratulations on picking on a communist retirement home. So brave.
  9. We're not going to backstab all of them. Just one. Looking at you hart. (In that final panel is Letum smoking a pipe?)
  10. Yet another state falls victim to the perils of communist diplomacy. o/ Atlas o/ UCR
  11. The NPO currently has 3.7% of all players in the game as members. I don't have a reliable means of doing the exact math for "back in the day," but if we suppose that when the game peaked around 40k players the NPO had roughly 1k, that would put our percentage then at 2.5%. So, you are likely correct.
  12. Good luck to all parties moving forward.
  13. So that's a no for round two? Best of luck to all of the former Aftermath alliances moving forward.
  14. > In-Game AA "The Order of Liberty and Defence" Instructions unclear, accidentally raided GOLD.
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