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#1 User is offline   Thomas Jefferson IV 

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Posted 26 September 2008 - 04:53 PM

I am making a story, typed, here is the basic plot:

In the FFA, their is a PETA spy, and she is reporting on them, when she falls in love with one of the members, this is a story of love, guns, guns, and love.

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Posted 26 September 2008 - 05:02 PM

is there a part in the story where you stop posting here?

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Posted 26 September 2008 - 05:04 PM

We will be an active part in the creative process of telling him most of us don't care about farming, but recognizes it's necessity.

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Posted 26 September 2008 - 05:09 PM

View PostLamuella, on Sep 26 2008, 06:02 PM, said:

is there a part in the story where you stop posting here?


Blasphemy is not the answer.

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Posted 26 September 2008 - 11:29 PM

Go ahead and write it then. Instead of just talking about writing it.

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 12:54 AM

View PostThomas Jefferson IV, on Sep 26 2008, 03:53 PM, said:

I am making a story, typed, here is the basic plot:

In the FFA, their is a PETA spy, and she is reporting on them, when she falls in love with one of the members, this is a story of love, guns, guns, and love.

I am finding it difficult to properly respond, and have made use of the Backpace key repeatedly over a short time.

TJIV, I think that you could probably count the number of people that do not know you are a farmer on one hand. We understand, you are as redneck as they come.

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 06:25 AM

Football Federation Australia? Protectionist Environmental Tillage Authority?

Right...

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 08:51 AM

Incredibly detailed outline. Also, spam is bad.

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 12:27 PM

Well, its rather detailed more then most think, I believe.

For one, PETA is a group of animal activist extremists, and the FFA is a group of what it says, future farmers, but most don't really become farmers, just learn about it. They have launched (Crusades) against us and 4-H, saying we are evil animal murders. (I have murdered animals before, but animals have murdered mine before, that be the case)

PETA- People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals
FFA- Future Farmers of America
4-h- im not sure but the pledge has to do with (hand, heart, head, health)

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 05:31 PM

View PostThomas Jefferson IV, on Sep 27 2008, 02:27 PM, said:

PETA- People for the Eating of Tasty Animals


correction here.

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 06:00 PM

So it's like west side story only it takes place on a farm?

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 06:21 PM

View PostGran the Terrible, on Sep 27 2008, 07:00 PM, said:

So it's like west side story only it takes place on a farm?


lol hardly

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 07:03 PM

View PostThomas Jefferson IV, on Sep 27 2008, 08:20 PM, said:

lol hardly


Hey, that'd be awesome!

Oh, I have a question. Are you a farmer?

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 09:09 PM

View PostHigh King Nick, on Sep 27 2008, 08:03 PM, said:

Hey, that'd be awesome!

Oh, I have a question. Are you a farmer?


Complicated Question.

Do I raise my own plants? No
Do I help others raise their's? Yes

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 11:01 PM

View PostThomas Jefferson IV, on Sep 27 2008, 10:09 PM, said:

Complicated Question.

Do I raise my own plants? No
Do I help others raise their's? Yes


Sharecropper? :P

Or... slave? :jihad:

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Posted 27 September 2008 - 11:07 PM

View PostDennis Von Bremen, on Sep 28 2008, 12:01 AM, said:

Sharecropper? :P

Or... slave? :jihad:


Neither. Family worked with some sharecroppers, ancestors anyways. Family owned slaves, ancestors anyways.

I do not like either of the words. I prefer "Agricultural Expert Maintenance Man" lol jk, I am a hand.

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Posted 28 September 2008 - 12:12 AM

So I would assume you are looking for input on your story?
If you are searching for substance you could check out the movie I Am An Animal: The Story Of Ingrid Newkirk And Peta. Or one of the movies made by PETA and posted on their site or one of the PETA support organization sites like goveg.com.
Happy ending might be, hippy chick eats a huge.... Hamburger at the end.

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